Edith: I took over the real Edith. I'm not from this world and everything here is actually from a storybook which is how I knew how most things were going to go. But the world's design wouldnt let me speak.
Killeon: Youre so brave to have to go through all that. (My wife is insane!!!; is it a witch's curse? I knew I should have searched for her earlier; the cold may have affected her mind.)
In all serious though; she drops a bomb just like that and all normal?? I dont remember but is there even magic in this world? Personally felt that could have been left out. Also are they changing that Cliff is not under the control of story? Still dont like the duke is getting scott free when he hated on Edith too and dont believe Reese had much affect on that other than grabbing his attention like she did the duchess.
I didn't like the revealing part. It felt so rush and unnatural.