I was looking for an omegaverse to read and I came across this again, so I got curious after I saw all the messages. Honestly? I remembered this being a lot sweeter. I don't know if it's that I'm older now or if it's that my standards for stories have grown a lot compared to idk 2018 or whenever it is I read this first, but I can't believe I used to consider this one of the best Japanese omegaverses.
And look, the premise has a lot of potential in the right hands. This author's? Not the right hands. At all. You'd need a lot more pages than what you can fit into a single volume to make this work, and you need A LOT of development for the MC to not make him sound like someone who should be on a government list. And to change your interpretation of what happens when a ''fated pair'' meet. For instance, not something sexual. I really do think it's possible to take this questionable story and turn it into something genuinely devastating in all the right ways.
All that being said, I'd much rather read the mock version about them being close in age and fighting like cats and dogs because they can't stand each other. That one seemed more fun than the rest of this manga combined.
I was looking for an omegaverse to read and I came across this again, so I got curious after I saw all the messages. Honestly? I remembered this being a lot sweeter. I don't know if it's that I'm older now or if it's that my standards for stories have grown a lot compared to idk 2018 or whenever it is I read this first, but I can't believe I used to consider this one of the best Japanese omegaverses.
And look, the premise has a lot of potential in the right hands. This author's? Not the right hands. At all. You'd need a lot more pages than what you can fit into a single volume to make this work, and you need A LOT of development for the MC to not make him sound like someone who should be on a government list. And to change your interpretation of what happens when a ''fated pair'' meet. For instance, not something sexual. I really do think it's possible to take this questionable story and turn it into something genuinely devastating in all the right ways.
All that being said, I'd much rather read the mock version about them being close in age and fighting like cats and dogs because they can't stand each other. That one seemed more fun than the rest of this manga combined.