some of those changes from version 1 and 2 were wild. in the chapter the leads first meet why have the guy walk in on him raping a man rather than just beating him? and then keep in the fact that he proceeds to murder that man as he is currently inside him? that scene was vile.
I will be the first to admit that my morality in romance is pretty skewed, but I draw the line at what is explicitly, textually rape. and on a romantic level, who the fuck would want to kiss and be fingered by a guy who literally just murdered the last man he raped? it was not cute. it was not necessary.
some of those changes from version 1 and 2 were wild. in the chapter the leads first meet why have the guy walk in on him raping a man rather than just beating him? and then keep in the fact that he proceeds to murder that man as he is currently inside him? that scene was vile.
I will be the first to admit that my morality in romance is pretty skewed, but I draw the line at what is explicitly, textually rape. and on a romantic level, who the fuck would want to kiss and be fingered by a guy who literally just murdered the last man he raped? it was not cute. it was not necessary.