I had fun reading this but I'm not sure if i LOVE the story. Something really feels off as to how the plot is moving. Like, the MC is trying to do TOO MANY things at once instead of tackling one after the other. Also, tell me why the red head ML candidate gets more screen time than the second brother ?? It's all over the place. I'll still keep on reading this tho, I wanna know who the endgame is. (〜￣△￣)〜 And i want lucas to go back into his body so the MC can have two overprotective dads
I had fun reading this but I'm not sure if i LOVE the story. Something really feels off as to how the plot is moving. Like, the MC is trying to do TOO MANY things at once instead of tackling one after the other. Also, tell me why the red head ML candidate gets more screen time than the second brother ?? It's all over the place. I'll still keep on reading this tho, I wanna know who the endgame is. (〜￣△￣)〜 And i want lucas to go back into his body so the MC can have two overprotective dads