I read the whole thing but im not satisfied it feels weird, mc experience long term abuse and being taken advantage for 7 years them he dipped then ml being all sad regret shit and getting hurt often, I feel like mc was guilt tripped into the relationship, of ml starved himself to death obviously they are going to point fingers at mc, he should have hooked up with someone new entirely
I read the whole thing but im not satisfied it feels weird, mc experience long term abuse and being taken advantage for 7 years them he dipped then ml being all sad regret shit and getting hurt often, I feel like mc was guilt tripped into the relationship, of ml starved himself to death obviously they are going to point fingers at mc, he should have hooked up with someone new entirely