I don't usually comment here, but I have a need to do it this time. The story? Definitely boring. Idea for the story? Actually good if executed right. Potential? Unfortunately wasted. It took me several days to finish this and I was sooo close to dropping the story, but I wanted to see how it ends. The ending was rushed and it was probably because author didn't know how to properly execute the idea. FL was supposed to be smart, but her smart was stupid because everything just worked out for her. She was very poorly written, she is agreeing to everything, she is pushed by that pathetic villainesse, and f*cking forgive the lame MC (Violet) in a blink of eye. Violet is just stupid. I loved Selena, and kinda loved the knight (although him being in love with FL was unnecessary). The better plot twist would be if Violet actually wasn't the crown prince, like we as readers are most definitely certain that he is the crown prince, and tham bammm he isn't. It would be fun if they actually had some magical beasts instead of monitors and cameras. I suppose that Selena is the author of all 101 books, as first book was about her and she becomes a writer (if that isn't true, than that's how I would like it to be). So in the end it was meh. I read it once and never again.
I don't usually comment here, but I have a need to do it this time. The story? Definitely boring. Idea for the story? Actually good if executed right. Potential? Unfortunately wasted. It took me several days to finish this and I was sooo close to dropping the story, but I wanted to see how it ends. The ending was rushed and it was probably because author didn't know how to properly execute the idea. FL was supposed to be smart, but her smart was stupid because everything just worked out for her. She was very poorly written, she is agreeing to everything, she is pushed by that pathetic villainesse, and f*cking forgive the lame MC (Violet) in a blink of eye. Violet is just stupid. I loved Selena, and kinda loved the knight (although him being in love with FL was unnecessary). The better plot twist would be if Violet actually wasn't the crown prince, like we as readers are most definitely certain that he is the crown prince, and tham bammm he isn't. It would be fun if they actually had some magical beasts instead of monitors and cameras. I suppose that Selena is the author of all 101 books, as first book was about her and she becomes a writer (if that isn't true, than that's how I would like it to be). So in the end it was meh. I read it once and never again.