it might just be me but...

jimiandbooks November 16, 2024 4:55 pm

i'm ngl, maybe i read this too fast. but when did blue and helm start liking each other fr? bccc them having sex in that ravine was so confusing lmao

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    Sam November 16, 2024 6:38 pm

    no I totally get you, aspects of the story and plot seemed to be not addressed, ignored, or skipped all together. I'd say it's rushed given how the plotline is going so far, maybe they're keeping information from us to evoke surprise, but I felt like the twist already happened and the story is just missing gaps in it's development in a way that's not purposeful or meaningful.

    Either way I'm just still here because lizardman hot.

    jimiandbooks November 16, 2024 8:48 pm
    no I totally get you, aspects of the story and plot seemed to be not addressed, ignored, or skipped all together. I'd say it's rushed given how the plotline is going so far, maybe they're keeping information fr... Sam

    thanks for your input! i wanted to give the story more time to gain more chapters in hopes that the plot will develop more. i agree, it def seems rushed. i've noticed some authors will rush the plot or character development to hurry and get to smut in order to keep their audience. but a great story with a slow build, especially in a story like this is crucial. i mean we're talking mortal enemies for hundreds of years. there's centuries of hate and oppression here, there's no way that each character put their biases aside, fell in love, and decided to be together in 27 chapters lol.

    but yes, mr. lizard, chameleon, reptilian man is v. hawt!