Overall, good but i think its for highly intellectual individuals. Not me im dumb.

Aira1.6 November 15, 2024 2:37 pm

I like what they wanted for the story, but the amount of complications mixed into it made it too much to comprehend. So much characters to keep up with, I honestly couldnt keep up with who was who and who did what. Maybe if i reread it I MIGHT understand it, BUT the feeling i got from reading it makes me not want to try rereading it.

Responses
    hale November 16, 2024 1:47 am

    If complicated plot is not something you like, it might be hard to enjoy this story. But, if you want to give this a chance, maybe wait until the mature version completed or you binge reading it instead the censored one, and try reading it from the beginning for maybe like third time.

    FML! so so bored... November 16, 2024 8:34 am
    If complicated plot is not something you like, it might be hard to enjoy this story. But, if you want to give this a chance, maybe wait until the mature version completed or you binge reading it instead the cen... hale

    You are right. I felt gaps in the story from where the mature version stopped. Might read those chapters again when released.

    QueenChan November 19, 2024 1:23 pm

    I am also dumb.I feel your pain.

    Like, I feel like I should have minored in contract law. I'm a little bored

    Nameno November 20, 2024 5:39 pm

    This is the reason I love this story. The plot was so interesting and I was anticipating the downfall and uprising, I don’t care to wait for the “mature” version, I definitely don’t even need the sex scenes to stay entertained