it's adorable, but after rereading it (after a long while) I'm just left with the feeling it could be more developed, since it doesn't explain almost anything. making the choice of the prince actually being from another place in the world is,, fine? a bit weird since I think everyone thought it was a different world,, but that also makes it seem like there wasn't actually magic magic involved, but?? what about the magic mirror?? how? what? ,, besides that if they're actually from the same world, just from different places, how do they communicate so well? how do they speak the same language?? it could be have been fun to make the mirror have more powers and one is like, it helps translate what people are saying? plus, after they found each other again they would have to learn to communicate without magic help eheh,, that could be so cute. would also love to know where they got the mirror and why it started connecting both. because they were lonely and born from the same "tree"? you know what I'm saying? with the amount of things the author could build upon, is a bit weird we were just left with no answers whatsoever,,, but I still find them absolutely adorable.
it's adorable, but after rereading it (after a long while) I'm just left with the feeling it could be more developed, since it doesn't explain almost anything. making the choice of the prince actually being from another place in the world is,, fine? a bit weird since I think everyone thought it was a different world,, but that also makes it seem like there wasn't actually magic magic involved, but?? what about the magic mirror?? how? what? ,, besides that if they're actually from the same world, just from different places, how do they communicate so well? how do they speak the same language?? it could be have been fun to make the mirror have more powers and one is like, it helps translate what people are saying? plus, after they found each other again they would have to learn to communicate without magic help eheh,, that could be so cute. would also love to know where they got the mirror and why it started connecting both. because they were lonely and born from the same "tree"? you know what I'm saying?
with the amount of things the author could build upon, is a bit weird we were just left with no answers whatsoever,,, but I still find them absolutely adorable.