Dude... the artist dropped the ball

tepho_snoopy November 14, 2024 3:33 am

Look I read the novel and all the artist had to do was match it or improve upon the story but even as a stand-alone the webtoon suck! (Just these last few chapters... the previous ones were good)

And that's because like I said before, they dropped the ball on the two most important scenes of the climax.
1 Edith's physical and emotional toll after the kidnapping
2 How Killeon was a bigger part to the completion of the third condition
I was gonna point the revelations of Edith's situation and Lize's evil to the duke and Duchess but honestly the novel did that mostly on the background so I won't

I had made my peace with the artist changing things ever since they started to show Lize's evil side way ahead of time. I was even exited because I figured the climax was gonna be epic with more emotionally impactful scenes and shocking revelations imcrimimating Cliff so he would actually get punished and not be passed off as a poor sap

Responses
    ✨✨ Maki ♥♥ November 14, 2024 3:42 am

    Yeah.. I was kinda hopeful as well since the Lize was exposed as the author earlier so I was hoping that there would be more impact on her being as hindrance or some sort but no.. it was poorly done.. I stopped reading after Edit scene in the train station cause it was weird