Boring

Yuki Moon November 12, 2024 7:07 am

I almost fell asleep reading the second chapter. I know that I didn't get far into it at all, but this is so terribly boring. The main problem is that there's no conflict. She transmigrates into a novel she read, the body that she took over has zero negative effects on both the children and their brother, the brother doesn't seem to be a harda** or and a**hole, and etc. There's zero conflict to buffer out

Responses
    fairykhai November 19, 2024 9:48 pm

    then dont read it. its very clearly a slice of life not much action (at least not currently)
    slice of life isnt going to be for everyone

    Yuki Moon November 20, 2024 5:26 am
    then dont read it. its very clearly a slice of life not much action (at least not currently) slice of life isnt going to be for everyone fairykhai

    I already stopped a long while ago ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭.

    Also, it's not because it's a slice of life that I found it boring. It's because it started out with a bit of suspense with her saying what character she transmigrated into and the possible problems that would bring, and then basically throwing that away. Not only that, but the beginning didn't really have a beginning. It was just rushed information, some throw aways, and BAM! Slice of Life!!

    The names are also so unoriginal. I normally don't care about that aspect in any sort of entertainment, but it really got me to not really care what happened to each of the kids.

    Also, even in a slice of life, there are conflicts. Probably not as big as most action stories, but small enough to make the story have some kind of ups and downs...if that makes sense. Like trying to get to know the kids, but the kids are wary of her, so she tries her best to win them over that day and succeeds.

    This would make the story flow much better with some kind of beginning like that, because it'll make us care more about the characters and the story in the long run. Basically, I would've continued to read it because it shows a more natural flow to her and the kids' relationship.

    Whatever, though. That's just me. Thanks for reading and have a lovely day!