this was bad to me idk

levipleasecallmeback November 11, 2024 5:41 am

am i missing something? everyone in the comments praised it, so i decided to read but im let down

im still on chapter 27, but their chemistry felt really forced because of how fast they progressed and opened up to each other. mc was undercover/secretive and ml was supposed to be suspicious of everyone under the pharmacy. however in early chapters, they ran into each other extremely quick and bonded quicker than ml and the illegitimate son. then neither of them were on guard which threw me off. it would’ve made sense if the abo caused it, however from the beginning there was nothing to build up on in terms of why they felt drawn to each other + were friendly from the start. imo it would’ve made sense if they interacted way later, since the worst thing for the pharmacy was for mc to draw attention from the people who could expose them? i felt like we needed more filler, and time for them to see each other as people worthy of trust- not direct romance from the start

Responses
    GumjiNyoki ♥ November 28, 2024 6:16 am

    Same its overrated. A cliche story just good enough, but not amazing or awesome as i thought it would be based on the comments. Haaaaiszz

    levipleasecallmeback November 28, 2024 6:25 am
    Same its overrated. A cliche story just good enough, but not amazing or awesome as i thought it would be based on the comments. Haaaaiszz GumjiNyoki ♥

    this is how i felt too! i don’t mind a basic/cliche story either but comments they made it seem like a must read or mind blowing when the progression was very subpar. i really liked the concept though but the execution… not good

    GumjiNyoki ♥ November 28, 2024 2:52 pm
    this is how i felt too! i don’t mind a basic/cliche story either but comments they made it seem like a must read or mind blowing when the progression was very subpar. i really liked the concept though but the... levipleasecallmeback

    Yeah haha i saw a comment saying rereading this which made me convinced that its good, but i dont think i'll reread this one. Its kind of a waste of time (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

    GumjiNyoki ♥ November 28, 2024 2:55 pm

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