The mc was heavily manipulated by his ex and that made him so dense to everything. On the other side the one thing that got me heated was that the mc knowing the ghost use electronics to mess with him at around 2 he would get either the phone or the laptop and it my might just be me but if I know that at 2:22 a have a ghost is coming I would have a bat, a Barney song at full volume, and cover everything that can make a reflection. Other than that it fairly good read.
The mc was heavily manipulated by his ex and that made him so dense to everything. On the other side the one thing that got me heated was that the mc knowing the ghost use electronics to mess with him at around 2 he would get either the phone or the laptop and it my might just be me but if I know that at 2:22 a have a ghost is coming I would have a bat, a Barney song at full volume, and cover everything that can make a reflection. Other than that it fairly good read.