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Most of it was unnecessary ngl, also some unrealistic stuff(yea ik it's fiction) but cmon if you gonna write about traumatizing stuff add a lil realistic aspect there
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Most of it was unnecessary ngl, also some unrealistic stuff(yea ik it's fiction) but cmon if you gonna write about traumatizing stuff add a lil realistic aspect there
Ijbol u can read the sides as a stand still short story and yk what I’m glad I dropped it and picked it up around the end/sides bc I feel like half of what went on provided little to no substance
edit: my friend read the whole thing and agreed that some of it was unnecessary