I mean, it didn't start thaaat bad. It had potential ig. The ending is too rushed, like, what about Jace? He just took two punches and that's it. Make him suffer more, idk??
Also I wanted to know a lot more about the brother. I feel so bad for him, I mean yeah he said and did many questionable things but I feel like he could've beem a better character. They just didn't work on him. (And I'm sorry to say that but, for me, he's the biggest smash of the entire story)
I have mixed feelings for the mc, I don't like him but at the same time I feel a little bad. Reading the ending, all he had to do was shushing Jace one time and it all would've ended. I get why he's "traumatized" and don't blame him for that, but???
And Avery is too good for everyone, he deserves better bro.
And the names make me laugh so much. Eric Yoon?? Wtf is that (￣∇￣")
I mean, it didn't start thaaat bad. It had potential ig. The ending is too rushed, like, what about Jace? He just took two punches and that's it. Make him suffer more, idk??
Also I wanted to know a lot more about the brother. I feel so bad for him, I mean yeah he said and did many questionable things but I feel like he could've beem a better character. They just didn't work on him. (And I'm sorry to say that but, for me, he's the biggest smash of the entire story)
I have mixed feelings for the mc, I don't like him but at the same time I feel a little bad.
Reading the ending, all he had to do was shushing Jace one time and it all would've ended. I get why he's "traumatized" and don't blame him for that, but???
And Avery is too good for everyone, he deserves better bro.
And the names make me laugh so much. Eric Yoon?? Wtf is that (￣∇￣")