my reply didnt go through im so mad i wrote so much >:(
how did the mc get over or cope with is trauma and depression in 16 sessions. i wished they focused more on the mcs journey in getting better because i noticed its more fucking than the therapy session fucking isnt gonna magically make you not want to kys like??? ALSO yaoi isnt all about sex there can be substance thats angst and love isnt gonna suddenly make everything okay because in mc's last session mf started talking bull abt he so easily shaken but cant be shaken because he loves someone?? pick a side bitch tf r u on abt "i can stop shaking one day now that i have somone who loves me"
anwayss can you guys suggest angst gut wretching angst like 10 years i loved you the most?
also to clarify what i said earlier why i added ml to mc's trauma list, it was suggested that ml and mc have major miscommunication issues in the start as well as before the start and it suggested that the ml was kind of an asshole thats why mc tried to kill himself amongst other things
first of the incest?? ew okay but the thing that gives me the ick too is in my opnion how theres little to no charcter development in the ml and mc. like didnt the mc have depression because of the ml and the mother? why wasnt that explored more?? why did he forgive the mf so easily?? this is so giving stockholom sydrome
i might just be a hater but this is ass ive seen better yaoi with a mc that has a mental illness...
ngl tho this could of been made better also this is more physciological than drama
lastly i hate that thet have sex all the time i want gut wretching angst here cant yaoi also have angst
as always this is my personal opinon and if i missed something and am wrong please tell me
(im begging you ╥﹏╥)