I mean, it’s not bad, but the only personality of the main character being "I’m strong" is pretty overused and boring :’) I could also immediately see that it was written by a man cause that’s not how… falling in love works? We also got zero introduction to the other main character other than the fact she’s a noble and weaker than our mc (/TДT)/ The constant "no way!! How did she dodge that!! How did she cut that!! How did she block that!!" is also not as effective as the author may think it is. But yeah, it’s nice, a mindless read for a lazy late night.
I mean, it’s not bad, but the only personality of the main character being "I’m strong" is pretty overused and boring :’) I could also immediately see that it was written by a man cause that’s not how… falling in love works? We also got zero introduction to the other main character other than the fact she’s a noble and weaker than our mc (/TДT)/
The constant "no way!! How did she dodge that!! How did she cut that!! How did she block that!!" is also not as effective as the author may think it is.
But yeah, it’s nice, a mindless read for a lazy late night.