This shit... is so ass

angeltyun__ November 6, 2024 8:34 pm

This felt like stagnant waters. You can remove one trope in this story and it still wouldn't change anything. What was the omegaverse for anyway? It still literally would work without it. And the antagonist is weak as fuck. He got ended just like that. He couldn't even fight back. They gave the ML too much power that it made it so easy to take revenge. He should have done that earlier before he met the MC if he was this powerful.

Weak backstory, weak emotional attachments, weak storytelling, they fuck every 3 chapters, and they fuck that also last 3 chapters each. They fuck more than they talk. They communicate through their ass and dicks. Whatever, everything is bland from the story to the character relationships.

Responses
    Jes8519 November 11, 2024 4:18 pm

    Couldn't agree more

    OinkOink November 12, 2024 12:22 am

    I share the same sentiment. Uke is soooo weak and totally useless. If he is pregnant, then it makes some sense to be omegaverse story. The only thing worth praising is the artwork. It's beautifully drawn.

    ユノン December 2, 2024 10:38 pm

    my exact thoughts.