this was so annoying to read like mercy or apohid or wtv his name is literally could’ve prevented all of this! and i don’t understand how the FL just forgave him?? like wtv . . the villains story— actually just the villains plot in general was dumb as fuck “my dad didn’t want people knowing im a bastard, he’s not as noble as he claims to be, he abuses his nephew— i hate families let me ruins these random peoples life!!” like bitch be frl . . then the sister too like.. she told the maid that she turned back time but not her sister?? not once? . . and the ending— omg don’t get me started.. filling in plot wholes with mercy/apothis/ dragon guy breaking the forth wall + rushed ending . . the one good thing i can say about this story is that in concept it was intresting (the idea was good but the way it was written was ass) and the ML and the FL were cute together
but i would recommend if u have time to waste
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this was so annoying to read like mercy or apohid or wtv his name is literally could’ve prevented all of this! and i don’t understand how the FL just forgave him?? like wtv
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the villains story— actually just the villains plot in general was dumb as fuck “my dad didn’t want people knowing im a bastard, he’s not as noble as he claims to be, he abuses his nephew— i hate families let me ruins these random peoples life!!” like bitch be frl
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then the sister too like.. she told the maid that she turned back time but not her sister?? not once?
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and the ending— omg don’t get me started.. filling in plot wholes with mercy/apothis/ dragon guy breaking the forth wall + rushed ending
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the one good thing i can say about this story is that in concept it was intresting (the idea was good but the way it was written was ass) and the ML and the FL were cute together