Responses
To clarify the revisions to the chapter just made it so much more clear at how DUMB MC looks bc he just can’t get his shit together. When I first read it, it felt like she was being dismissive/put off. Now she said “yk I’m not stupid right? Tell me what’s going on bc I don’t deserve this” and he still couldn’t lock in to answer that so hard cringe
I almost wish chap 33 wasn’t fix bc damn that was hard to read. CAUGHT and just looking stupid smh. Shout out to her though for handling herself and her feelings elegantly.