Issues but still good.

ReviewRaptor November 5, 2024 2:48 am

There are a few issues with the writing but it's an interesting story. So I'm looking forward to more.

Not a fan of the MCs personality tbh, but it's interesting to see this sorta dynamic for a change paired with the love interest's manipulative nature. So glad we don't get another Jinx MC type character who's getting walked over constantly or dumb as a brick. But even this guy here behaves weird sometimes. Hopefully that'll change at some point. XD

The art is decent but there's also a few issues there. Somehow all panels and poses look strangely stiff or lifeless. Not sure why, there's just something off about it. Not QUITE like those comics that use 3d models as base to redraw scenes, but a slightly tips into that direction.

Pretty sure if this has a novel the novel is more intricate and can manage to bring across emotions better and more clearly. The comic is a bit lacking in that department in some moments so far.

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