It was not as cowboy-esque as I expected lmaoooo. They only showed like one or two horses.
Not a bad story overall, but it did feel like their relationship development was kind of non-existent. I agree with comments that point out how the pacing was somewhat off. They confessed and started dating five minutes ago and already introducing one another (well, at least the top) as each other’s most important person. Even if they secretly had mutual feelings for a long time it felt so abrupt. It jumped straight to u-hauling and the whole together forever spiel. The only reason it bothered me a bit was because this story is rather self-aware in every other respect.
It was not as cowboy-esque as I expected lmaoooo. They only showed like one or two horses.
Not a bad story overall, but it did feel like their relationship development was kind of non-existent. I agree with comments that point out how the pacing was somewhat off. They confessed and started dating five minutes ago and already introducing one another (well, at least the top) as each other’s most important person. Even if they secretly had mutual feelings for a long time it felt so abrupt. It jumped straight to u-hauling and the whole together forever spiel. The only reason it bothered me a bit was because this story is rather self-aware in every other respect.