They way they spoke to each other felt so organic and cute. Also everything is done with consent. There’s no SA or dubcon by anyone. Not much violence nor any gore either. Despite the hitman stuff it was a pretty relaxing read.
It got a bit weaker towards the middle-ish. Like the moment ML decided to be done with his job and then quit it seems like the author felt that the appeal of the story was gone. It evolved into pure fluff while leaving some glaring questions unanswered. If we get answers in the extras (will we get extras?), ok cool. But why not just include it in the main story. Feels incomplete man.
Why are some authors treating extras/ side stories like video game patches and dlcs to complete the story.
They way they spoke to each other felt so organic and cute. Also everything is done with consent. There’s no SA or dubcon by anyone. Not much violence nor any gore either. Despite the hitman stuff it was a pretty relaxing read.
It got a bit weaker towards the middle-ish. Like the moment ML decided to be done with his job and then quit it seems like the author felt that the appeal of the story was gone. It evolved into pure fluff while leaving some glaring questions unanswered. If we get answers in the extras (will we get extras?), ok cool. But why not just include it in the main story. Feels incomplete man.
Why are some authors treating extras/ side stories like video game patches and dlcs to complete the story.