MC is a push over, and EVERY goddamn character want their spotlight at ch 21

crimsoncrow November 3, 2024 7:48 pm

FL i do love her giving people the benfit of doubt, and getting her revenge, but why the fuck does every mainish chara want to hog the spot light?

The way its done, it cuts the main action scenes, into long ass honestly, no one fucking asked for your life story of all these characters, espcially the FUCKING EMPRESS.

God move your autistic ass elsewhere, its like she got authority without the cardinal guy, why is she walking around in that ugly ass, leotard, and ballet shoes? when everyone else got ful lon ball gowns, like at least pick a better fit. They try to act like she's got authority, but she's way too autistic coded. They say she founded the whole empire and shit, barely show her fight in the tomb, and mainly asked around the 5 kings, I don't even see the point of them re raiding the tomb, (this part was more rethorical, yes ik its cuz the monsters popping up)

The freaking cardinal dude is giving psycho pedo vibes, and the blondie lil attentionwhore, dad who hates on the mc, and tries to kill her for god knows what reason, and honestly, idk if there was even a proper reason for the dad to help the cardinal, he abandons the daughter when she was six, takes her in only to drop her in the tomb, idk why him and the dead wife hate her so much?

Also lynn/lin i mean ya sweet puppy boi, with a hidden twist, aint much to say about him so far, aw well as the fluffy loli maid.

It feels pretty rushed the pacing of it drawn out.

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