Don't hate

iamb November 3, 2024 12:55 am

but I'm getting a little tired of the FMC.. I understand what life she's had and how she found her way to survive... and how she is stunted emotionally... But she knows his family is kind, he has been nothing but kind to her.. and I feel like the author now is throwing out these half said sentences and odd behaviors to prolong the story.. and I , for one, am not going to enjoy it. It feels like backtracking to a place that had this story unique, so trying to stay in that moment.

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    Kygnis November 3, 2024 1:59 am

    Tbh dont wanna admit but I kinda agree. This is getting tired lol

    Kygnis November 3, 2024 1:59 am

    Tiring*

    karie November 3, 2024 9:04 am

    I think it's a matter of, the FL is extremely ignorant. She was never treated with proper kindness prior to being in the family, but even then, she isn't aware that theyre so much better / do not have specific motivations behind them that she is unaware of. While she knows some miscellaneous things, she really does not know how to get along and talk with other humans... the only person she's talked to for 13+ years is herself

    Justforlols November 3, 2024 1:44 pm

    Well the king stuff hasn’t been resolved yet. So she cant just act like a normal person because she could die and damn his entire family too. Besides there’s too many stories where the characters immediately love and trust with no build up. This story may have a slower pacing but it’s to fully flesh out the characters and the conflict. They are complex characters.

    karie November 3, 2024 6:55 pm
    Well the king stuff hasn’t been resolved yet. So she cant just act like a normal person because she could die and damn his entire family too. Besides there’s too many stories where the characters immediatel... Justforlols

    this!!!!

    iamb November 3, 2024 8:48 pm
    Well the king stuff hasn’t been resolved yet. So she cant just act like a normal person because she could die and damn his entire family too. Besides there’s too many stories where the characters immediatel... Justforlols

    Yes, all good points.. I agree.. But there was already some understanding and working together with her husband.. They both know she's not deranged. So for her to act like that in front of him again I find annoying. If she had said ' the walls have ears and eyes' and tore up the table, I would be all in.