Responses
Its too rushed, nothing has depth, be it the characters personality's, emotions, or the way they act. It feels like when someone quickly tells a story saying "yeah, so this and this happend, and latter this happend and then i did this, and he told me no and i went like why and bla bla bla....".
I don't know if you get what i mean
There is something really weird about this story, it's not so Bad, but at the same I don't like it