Something about this story is so stiff. I dunno if it’s the art, the faces, the smut, or...

Katoanime November 1, 2024 9:27 am

Something about this story is so stiff. I dunno if it’s the art, the faces, the smut, or the plot. But seriously, it’s something. I did read the first season but I don’t remember anything at all?

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    Jeon-Cookies November 1, 2024 9:30 am

    To be fair, season one was mostly just about Seme winning over the uke and a few instances of showing his family relationship and how much of a dick his brother is. So it would make sense that you can't remember it.

    Riku November 1, 2024 9:33 am

    I kinda get what you are talking about. I find the art pretty.. especially the uke but the story doesn't seem to flow that well between the chapters.

    Katoanime November 1, 2024 9:41 am
    I kinda get what you are talking about. I find the art pretty.. especially the uke but the story doesn't seem to flow that well between the chapters. Riku

    Yes this. The flow of the chapters is so weird and out of place. Plus the dialogue is kinda… it’s not that great tbh. I keep finding myself skipping it until it looks serious.

    Riku November 1, 2024 10:41 am

    Agreed.. the dialogue could use work.. I mean in many places it's supposed to be light hearted sweet flirting but it's getting tedious and comes across as filler like material..tbh I am just skimming through most of it cuz it seems a little overdone..( ̄∇ ̄")