tbh nellan felt like a pointless antagonist and the ending of not knowing he is dead I fell like didn't know how to write the kind of character they were going for with him? it felt like the writing for the step brothers and half sister were better done as antagonist even tho it also felt like the story forgot about those character at points and only brought them back when they needed an antagonistic character one of the more interesting element for me in the story was the disease secondary plot so I dislike seeing an ending where that was really given a resolution idk i have such mix feelings for this story
tbh nellan felt like a pointless antagonist and the ending of not knowing he is dead I fell like didn't know how to write the kind of character they were going for with him? it felt like the writing for the step brothers and half sister were better done as antagonist even tho it also felt like the story forgot about those character at points and only brought them back when they needed an antagonistic character
one of the more interesting element for me in the story was the disease secondary plot so I dislike seeing an ending where that was really given a resolution
idk i have such mix feelings for this story