Still kinda enjoyed while I read it though

empresstori_j October 31, 2024 1:05 am

I loved the story, setting, culture, their clothes and definitely the art! ( Though sometimes, character's faces appear more elongated like the prince's (water priestess???)aunt. HAHAHAH well anyways

This is my review:

I like how things were slowly revealed from thier past and how it connects to their "present".

But there were a lot of plot holes. I MEAN A LOT. Honestly, this is the first time I was able to finish a story with a lot of it and not dropping it halfway.

( The story and whole plot was great and had a good start, I just wish they took advantage of it to gradually explain things and not abruptly covering it with new situations..)

1. So now what happens to Fiore, and that red head man with Nery's mistress? What was his agenda for sealing her memories? And most importantly, who is he and what was his role exactly???
2. Who was Lana and Sana's younger sibling? They weren't able to find out about their whereabouts or even give a short backstory or anything. How, why and when the twin lost their sibling.
3. This is what bothers me. If Prince Halid was in love with "Rain" from when he was young and was stated that he WAITED to be reunited with her again, THEN WHY DID HE OPEN HIS HEART TO ARSELA????? Uhm I mean, sure they grew up together and all and became eachother's betrothed but whaaaattt???
To me it just seems like, after Arsela died being a sacrifice tto purify the land or mutants or whatever, it just feels like since Nerys' is the one alive, now he remembered that he lived her from when they first met when they were young??? Is my girl Nerys a spare sir???

4. Now what happened to Marsela? Was she destined to rot there? Dude forgot about her. I'm not sure but seems like she was a victim of the prince's cousin too. Well I wouldn't brush of the fact that she was crazy about the prince as well.

5. So why was the current empress not in good terms with the prince?

6. If Khalif's wife was pregnant during the time he added a stimulant on the princess consort's drink, what happened to their child after his wife was unconscious? I mean the main characters have been married for more than a year in their timeline and his wife only came back to consciousness 2 or 3 chapters before the end soooo don't tell me the unborn child was..... Goodness. I don't want to stress myself with this anymore

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