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reyul! not enough screentime was given, nor the worldbuilding until the last part, veronica came in randomly, ml just happens to pop up in the best times like what hahah..????
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reyul! not enough screentime was given, nor the worldbuilding until the last part, veronica came in randomly, ml just happens to pop up in the best times like what hahah..????
I really like the isekai trope, i really like the enemies to lovers trope, the same goes for fl who overcomes a bad situation/change her future, and this story wanted to be all of those thigs SO BAD that forgot to have a plot.
In the beginning things kinda made sense, we had a clumsy, generic main couple, our fl was a little bland, but nothing terrible, nothing out of the ordinary. Was this going to be my favorite? No, but i would have my fun.
But then, out of ABSOLUTELLY NOWHERE it became a completely different story.
Besides the weak original plot, with the evil-for-no-reason mil, the crazy maids, him not moving a muscle to protect her even though he was aware of her standing in the house (because even the worms in the garden where), somehow this became a fighting for power, next emperor is crazy omg, type of thing.
FOR
NO
REASON
Why ? Why keep saying that the villain was adopted if was not important to the plot? Why was fl "sterile" if it didn't change anything? What happened to the siblings? Why did the mil was such a bitch for no apparent reason? Who was the crazy dumbass that hired a man with bad blood with the family to be a physician? Why the butler, who knew everything, didn't think "well this is kinda weird, this is strange, my boy duke was not dying until this man who hates this family came here"??????????
But what hurts me is that the author KNEW the story where badly told, in the end they explained that is hard to translate novels in comics, witch i agree, i couldn't do it, but i NEVER EVER before read that in a final chapter.
If even the author have to say that the story may be lacking plot points or be a little confusing and that the reader should read the original product too for better understanding, the how can i not agree that this was rushed, confusing and overall bad?
TLDR: Too much ideas, too little time developing them. The initial idea was ok, black cat husband and puppy wife nursing him, but it was just too much, too fast, with too little explanation or background, not to mention the personality changes of the main couple and the giant plot holes (WHERE ARE THE SIBLINGS? didn't this whole thing happened because of them?, i'm i crazy?)