Honestly I feel like the author needs to slow down

Skythingx October 27, 2024 2:36 pm

This story had so much potential. yes, the fl suffered a lot in the beginning but I wished the author took some time to give the fl a second to really grow and become independent. Like she barely just came back to the capital, she’s alr marrying the ml and having a child with him. Plus she seems like she has completely forgot about the part where she believes he tried killing her. Can we be fucking serious how is that realistic in anyway. Please someone tell me if they’d be blushing and kissing a man on their cheek who supposedly tried to kill them and their child I dont dislike anyone in the story rn it’s just frustrating to read.

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