MC may be a bit of an asshole (like all those thoughts you had about also being annoyed by Carson, maybe, you know, say them???? or maybe give us, the readers, the reason why you won't share with Hyunho that you were also annoyed by him) but he's got a point. I ADORE Hyunho but he needs to learn to separate business from pleasure...even just in the short-term. I know he's only there for Eyan and to a point that's fine that it's his motivation, but also Eyan's right that a lot of people would kill to have the opportunities Hyunho has right in front of him, and Hyunho needs to get his head on straight at least to finish strong. BUT ALSO Eyan needs to communicate more. he's too aloof and almost seems to see himself as being superior to Hyunho, or at least straight up refuses to explain anything ever and then criticizes Hyunho for getting upset. so yea, asshole lol. (I don't think he's a bad person/red flag, you can be an asshole without being those things) Carson is meant to be annoying I think, moreso than like, an outright villain or second top. And he does his job well bc he annoyed the fuck out of me lmao I like it. it's relatively realistic and I can see from both characters' perspectives. the plot is plottin.
MC may be a bit of an asshole (like all those thoughts you had about also being annoyed by Carson, maybe, you know, say them???? or maybe give us, the readers, the reason why you won't share with Hyunho that you were also annoyed by him) but he's got a point. I ADORE Hyunho but he needs to learn to separate business from pleasure...even just in the short-term. I know he's only there for Eyan and to a point that's fine that it's his motivation, but also Eyan's right that a lot of people would kill to have the opportunities Hyunho has right in front of him, and Hyunho needs to get his head on straight at least to finish strong.
BUT ALSO
Eyan needs to communicate more. he's too aloof and almost seems to see himself as being superior to Hyunho, or at least straight up refuses to explain anything ever and then criticizes Hyunho for getting upset. so yea, asshole lol. (I don't think he's a bad person/red flag, you can be an asshole without being those things)
Carson is meant to be annoying I think, moreso than like, an outright villain or second top. And he does his job well bc he annoyed the fuck out of me lmao
I like it. it's relatively realistic and I can see from both characters' perspectives. the plot is plottin.