Someone get this artist a new writer her art style is too beautiful to be wasted on a stor...

exotania October 26, 2024 1:41 am

Someone get this artist a new writer her art style is too beautiful to be wasted on a story like this

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    Blackieberry October 26, 2024 9:19 am

    You know sometimes they also write their on story right. And yes not everyone is talented in writing stories, maybe their talent is only in the field of drawing lol

    Lalaa October 26, 2024 5:31 pm
    You know sometimes they also write their on story right. And yes not everyone is talented in writing stories, maybe their talent is only in the field of drawing lol Blackieberry

    Whatever it turns out to be, I also hope this artist get a better writer than whoever wrote this plot ☠

    Mr McDingDong5729 October 27, 2024 3:46 pm
    Whatever it turns out to be, I also hope this artist get a better writer than whoever wrote this plot ☠ Lalaa

    Bro like
    Where’s the plot
    What’s the conflict?? Sexual tension??? He hasn’t nutted for so long he got clarity JUST now after two nuttings?
    And dude look 6 years realising he hates Hotaru cause he loves *cough*isobsessedwith*cough* Hotaru?
    Look, I liked the scene where he’s walking down the road his insecurities and whatever he’s running from’s come flooding at him. That was a moment.
    But that was the only moment The author has the timing going so wrong lol like what have they been doing for 6 years. There’s space and time in writing.
    And we literally cringed through the first 3 chapters. It was disgusting to read them.
    (I did because I just wanted to find out wtf was happening, and the art probably was probably what tricked me into investing)