it felt so rushed this had so much potential if they just gave it time. a few more chapters, a bit more character development and a smidge more romance wouldve been perfect. usually i dont like longer stories, but this needed around 20 more chapters. ilya and jerry were cute, they were perfect, really. but you cant just end it on a "and they lived happily ever after" so suddenly like that, please, you cant just make him go "oh, i like him." then make them get married the next chapter smh. im so disappointed.
it felt so rushed this had so much potential if they just gave it time. a few more chapters, a bit more character development and a smidge more romance wouldve been perfect. usually i dont like longer stories, but this needed around 20 more chapters. ilya and jerry were cute, they were perfect, really. but you cant just end it on a "and they lived happily ever after" so suddenly like that, please, you cant just make him go "oh, i like him." then make them get married the next chapter smh. im so disappointed.