okay so i started and finished the whole thing today and its honestly one of the best plots ive read so far
SPOILER***** my issue is how they portrayed him as a guy who wouldnt ever entertain any woman but all of a sudden he had a previous fiance??? maybe its just my personal opinion but i feel like she let that slip WAY too easily. i feel like they shouldve explained it a little more or at least mentioned he only saw her as a sister. they also never cleared up how he basically replaced his first fiance with the fl, like there was no explanation or detail for it at ALL. the deaths of his grandmother and the fiance is also unclear. i might just be digging too deep into this but i cant imagine how the fl just glossed over all of this entirely.
besides that, i rly enjoyed the plot because it added actual substance and the traitors werent painfully obviously being suspicious, like the suspense was pretty high(or maybe im just rly dense).
at some point in the middle i was just rooting for her to leave once and for all bc the whole thing with the previous fiance was WAY too much for me. like we can infer how much ml loves the mc but we cant understand his REAL thoughts. i just NEED to know his thought process between his first fiance and fl
okay so i started and finished the whole thing today and its honestly one of the best plots ive read so far
SPOILER*****
my issue is how they portrayed him as a guy who wouldnt ever entertain any woman but all of a sudden he had a previous fiance??? maybe its just my personal opinion but i feel like she let that slip WAY too easily. i feel like they shouldve explained it a little more or at least mentioned he only saw her as a sister. they also never cleared up how he basically replaced his first fiance with the fl, like there was no explanation or detail for it at ALL. the deaths of his grandmother and the fiance is also unclear. i might just be digging too deep into this but i cant imagine how the fl just glossed over all of this entirely.
besides that, i rly enjoyed the plot because it added actual substance and the traitors werent painfully obviously being suspicious, like the suspense was pretty high(or maybe im just rly dense).
at some point in the middle i was just rooting for her to leave once and for all bc the whole thing with the previous fiance was WAY too much for me. like we can infer how much ml loves the mc but we cant understand his REAL thoughts. i just NEED to know his thought process between his first fiance and fl