story was all over the place, many parts like behaviour and scenes were inconsistent and c...

Itachi99 October 25, 2024 12:55 am

story was all over the place, many parts like behaviour and scenes were inconsistent and clashing. ending rushed and incomplete, idk if we missing chapters or not.. but ig it leaves u with the idea how it all turns out later on. overall could've been much better with more chapters to avoid said things.
it's not entirely a bad read. concept had potential, just not that great executed. at least got happy ending.

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