For some reason, my comment got cut. Continuation:
"Kael mysteriously warns Maythan about his brother but mc gets fooled anyways. In a dire situation Kael appears to magically save mc." Especially with how in love Kael was acting in the last chapters, he'd give an excuse as to why he can't tell (royal family confidentiality or smth idk) instead of just dismissively saying he can't tell. It's just so out of character.
Also, Shaw's whole character is bad. Apart from her purpose as an annoyance, does she actually have any goals? She was supposed to love the game, so shouldn't she be excited to see/interact with the characters? Instead she goes bother her brother? The only one that doesn't belong in the game? Since when was she a bro-con?
Honestly i get your frustration but... she'd be annoying either way to readers since they would be on her ass whenever she'd get close to the male leads, and then they'd call her a pick-me instead of a fan. What I'm implying is.. bitches will be bitching about every single thing regardless, just like you! it doesn't matter if death made her closer to her brother, and fixing the story is the only way out I don't understand how you missed that.
I agree with where you are coming from in terms of his sister. However, I think you are looking at her as someone who only exists within the game opposed to having a life outside of it. I think if I was transported into a game, and suddenly found out my sibling was in the game with me (no matter if we got along or not), I would probably try to cling to them as well. Because that is the only REAL familiarity within that world, and to interact with the characters could ultimately mean nothing. I think characters can be multifaceted instead of having one defining characteristics that drives their behaviors
Yeah I'd get that if they were both transported into the world by accident. But iirc, she intentionally went after him and I don't think her reason was that she suddenly realized how dearly she loves her brother and wants him back (￣∇￣")
Nah, i just binged on this so i remember this kinda well. She figures out she'd fatally injured her brother after the stomp from hell and, in a panic, she reaches over to get her phone to call emergency services. But she ends up tripping over his body or something and she bonks her head against something and gets transmigrated as well. So no, she actually had no idea any of this would happen, and for the longest time, she didn't even have plans to go back to her OG life coz she wanted to somehow interact with the other characters. But the body she transmigrated into is not that of an Academy student, so aside from the mc (who's her brother and they'd be able to make plans to meet up), none of the main male leads will be accessible to her (cedric's the brother of the body she's in, so the guilt and the weirdness of it all will definitely not allow her to want to hang around him much at all)
Ohhhhh alright, thanks for the recap. I must've mixed it up with another isekai then. (￣∇￣")
Guess the sister is not that bad then, just a tad bit annoying.
I feel like the author has hit a wall or something because this is going downhill fast. Usually people have reasons for their actions and are very willing to share them. But that warning from Kael was bullshit. Like the author wanted to write ✍