Not to be a party popper but ...thats it? Feels too much out of character. The dude was a lunatic who murdered someone in the previous life and tried to do the same again. Putting location control, speakers on his brother phone. Tried to ruin someone else life and going completely batshit. And then he gets some trauma and realises he fkd up? And is a soft boy.....nahh. Author better sell me another beverage. I don't drink this one.
Also, why is the MC like an actual child? Homie you older than me, set yourself straight!
And not only that, in the flashbacks when they were younger he already seems like a total "psycho". Someone like that doesn't change from one moment to another.
And not only that, in the flashbacks when they were younger he already seems like a total "psycho". Someone like that doesn't change from one moment to another. Cloe
Exactly. Even his friends knew how much he hated his brother that they suggested killing him. And he says he cares about his brother? Author was going for the complex character and instead just made him go ooc
Not to be a party popper but ...thats it? Feels too much out of character.
The dude was a lunatic who murdered someone in the previous life and tried to do the same again. Putting location control, speakers on his brother phone. Tried to ruin someone else life and going completely batshit. And then he gets some trauma and realises he fkd up? And is a soft boy.....nahh. Author better sell me another beverage. I don't drink this one.
Also, why is the MC like an actual child? Homie you older than me, set yourself straight!