Okay, the concept is interesting. But the execution is a meeeeeeh, indeed. It's like reading those story that you write when you're 12 years old—simply, childish, full of your wish to led a happy life without getting any obstacles. Like how come suddenly everyone fall in love with her? It was rushed too..... if only they write it with more depth, it won't be this bad.
Okay, the concept is interesting. But the execution is a meeeeeeh, indeed. It's like reading those story that you write when you're 12 years old—simply, childish, full of your wish to led a happy life without getting any obstacles. Like how come suddenly everyone fall in love with her? It was rushed too..... if only they write it with more depth, it won't be this bad.