This story is so confusing I swear☹ let’s just get to the smut

TaesWife October 21, 2024 12:55 pm

This story is so confusing I swear☹ let’s just get to the smut

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    Shameless October 21, 2024 4:44 pm

    Same, I'm dropping after Ch 17. The beginning of 18 starts with "Ten years ago". The story is so convoluted when I just came for the gender bending smut. I gave up and started skimming around Ch 14 bc the story doesn't interest me (mystery, suspense). And I honestly don't like any of the characters. So Now I'm really just giving up.

    Ruu78 October 22, 2024 5:03 pm

    Sorry, how is it confusing to you? For me , the story is very good unlike some smut that has no plot.

    TaesWife October 23, 2024 7:32 am
    Sorry, how is it confusing to you? For me , the story is very good unlike some smut that has no plot. Ruu78

    The whole world-building and government stuff confused me, I feel like it’s not laid out clearly enough nor is it super interesting. Stories like In The Dog House, I feel more interested in the setting. It has a good plot, and smut

    Not saying this story is terrible, I do like it but the plot just seems very off to me.