Hmmm i kinda wish he had delved a bit more, Ik it wasn’t his story to tell but I believe...

Ami03 October 21, 2024 2:24 am

Hmmm i kinda wish he had delved a bit more, Ik it wasn’t his story to tell but I believe the other members should have felt a little more guilty of the way they were w him. At least been more aware…
As a reader, call me cold hearted, or may have been the fact I haven’t read this since the last update, but I didn’t exactly feel emotionally moved, it was something we alr knew, ig his delivery was kinda passive… perhaps the recent occupier of the body had recalled his own memories and resonated as he was talking….

Or that he had touched on the fact his teenage years haven’t been kind to him, perhaps his fans and those around him know that there was always a deeper reason to his past behavior. Idk ig I wanted a more heart tugging explanation and rawrer* emotions from the members. lol ik red head was getting angry for him, but that’s now, maybe the next chapters will highlight some self reflection from the members.

Then again, it’s just how he is, he, the current Mac, feels deeply but doesn’t show it at all, or at least not so obviously so it’s very in character for him to be so simple with his explanation to his deep and complex character. Also, it’s not his story, he has his own troubles. And they aren’t sharing the same body, so it’s not like they’d be some sort of emotional conflict.

Lastly, I seriously wish it was the og mc that had this moment, he let go too soon after their soul swap, it’s a real shame, at least if he saw the members reaction to his brief backstory, he could’ve left in peace, with some sort of closure.

But I do like the story, I don’t want to make it seem like I find it all a shame, the way it came to be. It’s enjoyable, deep and very different. The art style is quite nice too :)

Responses
    Fattest Gyatt October 21, 2024 2:59 am

    but yeah he's in front of a dangerous dude that might twist his words

    Ilovebl October 21, 2024 3:06 am

    I feel you I just finished reading this yesterday and again for the new chapter today I feel like they should feel a whole lot worse.......

    Ami03 October 21, 2024 4:34 am
    but yeah he's in front of a dangerous dude that might twist his words Fattest Gyatt

    No I get that, I don’t mean that he should expose himself fully but he could’ve added a little more to indicate just how long and how deep his scars are, the way he simplifies it makes it seem like something to just move on from without addressing the root of the issue, or even bringing some awareness to his problems, they were all just tiptoeing around him the whole time, it’s sad, they were hoping his memories wouldn’t return only because they didn’t want him to be the depressing and overwhelming man that he was, now he’s just internally melancholy and “stable”.

    Also, that creepy producer asked to switch off the cameras, ik it’s not really reassuring, but idk I was hoping for a bit more. I’m just being greedy ngl

    Ami03 October 21, 2024 4:37 am
    I feel you I just finished reading this yesterday and again for the new chapter today I feel like they should feel a whole lot worse....... Ilovebl

    Rightt?? It’s kinda annoying seeing them cosy up to him and not even try understand him, I get that they’re scared but that’s pure bs atp.