The “scene” in the novel was done a lot differently than this, this kinda makes it look like she easily gave in without him trying too hard but the novel had a lil more desperation and pathetic begging from ML’s part before she *cough cough* let him hit. I prefer that version of events. Very much a passion infused moment there while this falls….flat.
The “scene” in the novel was done a lot differently than this, this kinda makes it look like she easily gave in without him trying too hard but the novel had a lil more desperation and pathetic begging from ML’s part before she *cough cough* let him hit. I prefer that version of events. Very much a passion infused moment there while this falls….flat.