This is good writing

sarcat October 20, 2024 10:25 pm

I actually like this more than on or off.
I don't want to be a party pooper but this story is more realistic than the first one.
Yiyoung and Kang have a significant maturity gap which realistically is going to cause some issues and, imo, seeing them navigate their relationship together and solve those issues is actually good writing.
All that said, I dislike the third guy and Yiyoung's inability to be more firm with him and rejecting his advances more properly. It's a very cliché trope.

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