Guys…

mxrgaryna October 20, 2024 6:04 pm

I stumbled upon it because I really like the fantasy/forest spirit/demon trope, but is it only me that thinks that this was just… really, really, *really* forced? And frankly, a bit illogical?
*SLIGHT SPOILERS AHEAD*

Perhaps I shouldn't expect much out of this kind of thing, but what really bothered me was the way the warrior was portrayed in the most of the first chapter completely disagreed with the way he was portrayed after their "fight"? Also, a really stupid thing to mention, but his new haircut was 10x worse than the one he had before. I won't even mention how insanely annoying that demon was, but alas, that is just my opinion.

(And mention of mpreg was so unnecessary that I had to pause for a while.)

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