Honestly if i was the dad i would disown the brothers, cause they had one fucking job and ...

Orinoko October 19, 2024 8:52 pm

Honestly if i was the dad i would disown the brothers, cause they had one fucking job and that is to keep FL safe, so if the two of them together can't protect one person, how can someone trust them to protect the entire territory,( and the dad is still young he can pop out another child if he needs to )if i was him i would think that they left her alone on purpose so that she can get hurt, esspecially cause they had a fight because of her, there is no way i woulnd't be suspicious that they really did leave her alone on purpose, esspecially since they know that the emperror, the temple and many other nobles that don't like her would use this opportunity to kidnap or kill her cause it's easy to make it look like an accident


One other thing that bothers me in this story is the possible ML so from here on out there are SPOILERS for those that want to skip this part:









So from what i read the ML is the Tower Master, and im kinda not happy about it, i mean it was kinda predictable that he is the end game cause it's the typical plot of: enemies to lovers, ML having a condition that only FL can cure, FL and ML getting closer cause they are teaching eachother something and so on and so on, and that's ok we have seen this done a thousand times but one thing that bothers me is the ML age, like he is over 100 Y/O and here we are watching his romance with a 16y/o, idk it feels kinda pedo, the dude could be her great grandpa, yea i know there are probably stories where the ML or FL is 5000 y/o, but in those stories the age is just way to redicioulus to be taken seriously, but here these are actuall ages that people can achive, i know that this is a fictional story but irl if a story came out about a 100 y/o man dating a 16y/o girl the internet would go wild, and one thing that would be funny is, when his curse is lifted his body would just starts aging so that it can match his actuall age, it would be interesting to see the FL's reaction to that, maybe they would search for the person who cursed him so that they could do it again well anyway thank for reading my little rant and byee ヾ(☆▽☆)

Responses
    Fujxromi October 22, 2024 6:57 am

    I was hoping it's Kai

    Kronus^^ October 22, 2024 4:18 pm

    If the dad is possibly looking for someone to pop out a child with. I volunteer

    Orinoko October 22, 2024 8:35 pm
    If the dad is possibly looking for someone to pop out a child with. I volunteer ♀ Kronus^^

    Hahahahaha you have good taste

    Orinoko October 22, 2024 8:38 pm
    I was hoping it's Kai Fujxromi

    Well too bad, it would have been cool if the autor made some epilouge stories where we see FL's route's with the other guys, cause if you are gonna have so many ML's you should satisfy their fans as well ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    Esti October 23, 2024 5:50 am
    Well too bad, it would have been cool if the autor made some epilouge stories where we see FL's route's with the other guys, cause if you are gonna have so many ML's you should satisfy their fans as well ╮(�... Orinoko

    True but also does she needs to date the male lead? Bc i do know she needs to find him and figure out he is but i don't remeber if she has to date the OG ML soooo I'm hoping we get in the story in the end a different ML the story one.

    Orinoko October 23, 2024 7:08 pm
    True but also does she needs to date the male lead? Bc i do know she needs to find him and figure out he is but i don't remeber if she has to date the OG ML soooo I'm hoping we get in the story in the end a ... Esti

    Hmm it would be an interesting twist, but in these kind of stories the FL and ML have to end up together so im not very hopefull ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    - 3 - November 23, 2024 4:19 pm
    I was hoping it's Kai Fujxromi

    Yeah I was hoping for him too ngl it’s hard to break away from him when he was the first male candidate (NOT INCLUDING THE BROTHERS) that had chemistry with her. I see more of his pov then the others no matter how hard the story try’s to push my eyes elsewhere

    Like girl his on abandoning him it’s sad seeing him alone. Tbh out of all the male leads he seems more pitiful he is the only one in my eyes that’s giving second male lead syndrome so even if he doesn’t get fl give him someone at least I don’t want homeboy being in a harem when he isn’t end game

    - 3 - November 23, 2024 4:19 pm
    Yeah I was hoping for him too ngl it’s hard to break away from him when he was the first male candidate (NOT INCLUDING THE BROTHERS) that had chemistry with her. I see more of his pov then the others no matte... - 3 -

    Like girl *keeps on*

    Shiro December 15, 2024 10:11 pm

    Disowning the children isn't a small matter , so far as we have read, we have seen that the father has shown much love to the daughter maybe because he missed his real daughter who had died, we don't know how the childhood of the boys were but we do know that the father didn't give them much attention. Truthfully it is the father's fault for neglecting them, the children are not a fault for thinking otherwise and being jealous of the mc.

    But we can't ignore their actions towards her, i agree to hate on them, right now louis is having his redemption arc, the author shows Evan in a good light sometimes when it doesn't make sense yet shows his hatred towards mc, i don't like Evan, not even a bit because he is too harsh and is full of assumptions. He is no good but I can say louis might get good, we can't always see their past mistakes.

    I have no problem with the ml but u do have a point in those things, i agree with almost everything u have said. It's just that disowning had me kinda sensitive because i won't be able to disown my child unless there are circumstances where I can't afford to raise them.

    Orinoko December 23, 2024 9:38 pm
    Disowning the children isn't a small matter , so far as we have read, we have seen that the father has shown much love to the daughter maybe because he missed his real daughter who had died, we don't know how t... Shiro

    Maybe i was too harsh when i sead that he needs to disown the brothers but they need some sort of punishment to really reflect on their actions, cause like i sead how can the duke trust them to take care of thousands of people in the territory if they can't protect one person that's right next to them, and they know is great danger.

    I also don't like the dad, cause he was only treating the FL well (i generally don't like stories where the dad would worship the ground the FL walks on, but treats his sons like a nusance) and i can't say that the dad was good to them cause he left them alone when their mother died (it can hradly get worse than that), and not long after that he brings a child that looks like him, it's completlly understandable that the brothers would be angry and think that she is his illegitamite child, the thing that bothers me is that are putting the blame on the FL far more than they do on the dad, esspecially Evan, yes i understand that's easier to shift the blame on others especially when you are a child but he is an adult now, he should realize that even if by some crazy chance the FL was the dukes daughter, it's not like she chose to be born that way, and stop hating her, and focus on the real root of the problem that is the dad, but im exscited to see how his redeption arc will turn out.

    Im sorry if i offended you with my comment, i hope that no one will have to face the situation of possibly having to disown their child, i was trying to be a bit dramatic but maybe i wen't too far, i'll try to be more carefull in the future (⌒▽⌒)