This is so good and different

iamb October 19, 2024 4:24 am

I really like it, except for the MC's black dot eyes.. I don't get why they are like that, unless it's suppose to be part of the story somehow.. if it's just an artistic decision to make her quirky, I don't know why honestly, but I just can't like it. No feelings in the eyes, is probably why, but also, it just looks fake and pulls me out of the story.

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    helvetica October 24, 2024 2:07 am

    I feel like it’s supposed to be like that because of how she feels like a husk of a person and stuff. Thematically, it makes sense, since she’s pretty emotionless for the most part

    iamb October 24, 2024 5:16 am
    I feel like it’s supposed to be like that because of how she feels like a husk of a person and stuff. Thematically, it makes sense, since she’s pretty emotionless for the most part helvetica

    yea, I thought of all kinds of reasons the author is doing it, ... it just bothers me.. :).. like I said, I actually can only stare at those two black dots like I'm hypnotized, haha.. and the story takes second place. Altho I do really like it, like I said.