Mehhhhh

No_more_drty_deeds October 18, 2024 9:00 pm

So I for one liked their dynamic so far, I don’t mind asshole characters and since the MC is fun to watch and never seems to realize what an asshole the guy is in had a great time. Howeverrr there is a limit to writing a character to be an asshole while still having a personality. Now the ML is just a an insane dick to an unreasonable degree, not taking the MC clearly being exhausted or mentally drained not seriously was sad to see but the whole assaulting him while the Mc is out drunk is just unnecessary, does not add to the story and in my opinion does not fit with how the ml was being portrayed so far. It annoys me because it was just put in for the fun of it?? Or what?

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    NoyB October 18, 2024 9:10 pm

    I think this chapter is to show that the ML is jealous but still doesn't understand his feelings so he's beig possessive. He doesn't care about MC because that's the character. Something must change soon to develop ML