I love the story and the writing but there’s lot of unanswered questions and something i...

kuroogami October 18, 2024 12:49 pm

I love the story and the writing but there’s lot of unanswered questions and something is missing. I think I’m expecting for something but it was not delivered. I can’t explain it right now, i’m not making sense so it’s time to re-read maybe i’ll figure it out

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    Nearin October 18, 2024 4:24 pm

    I agree with you, I feel the same way. It was such a good read but something is lacking or there's this something in me expecting something I cannot explain. Maybe they could have shown them professing their feelings more??? The sexy scene is a bonus of course but I wanted them to show something moaaaaar!! But I can't name it ><

    kuroogami October 18, 2024 6:20 pm
    I agree with you, I feel the same way. It was such a good read but something is lacking or there's this something in me expecting something I cannot explain. Maybe they could have shown them professing their fe... Nearin

    Riggght. They should have also discuss more about their realizations? I think the POVs are also lacking. It’s too short ╥﹏╥ and MC’s major concerns were not really discussed properly it just got solve immediately