wouldve been perfect

a burning hill October 18, 2024 11:39 am

The story encapsulated such an amazing array of psychological thought. It has such an intriguing story that just kept me hooked till the end. The character's trauma response was done so well like the constant back and forth between leaving or staying, feeling stagnant about the situation, and the doubt that you have when some part of you respond positively to an otherwise negative situation. Then the ending happened. This could have shown that amazing growth and finally being able to get out of that constant repetition but instead we get this in what I feel is very abrupt ending. Everything was going so well that I expected it to continue. Bro literally got therapy like. A chance to finally get into a relationship that isn't actually toxic. But then he reverted back to middle of the story in such a sudden and out of place way. I could have accepted it if there was like some sort of buildup or some sort of like warning that this was gonna happen, but instead we just get this weird less than 10 panels of story that shows nothing. I love reading psychological stories but that ending just threw me off. So that's my opinion 3/5.

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