this was like a hotpocket

Gentothegeisha October 18, 2024 4:17 am

hot on the outside (smut, art) and kinda cold and unpalatable on the inside (clusterfuck plot). couque deserves better, and hu’s relationship w berry(?) confused the fuck outta me lol. however, i think my biggest gripe, which i’ve seen others bring up, is pacing. it felt like a four car pile up of plot.
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